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今天先送大家一个写作的句型：

经济学人原句：

Opinions are furiously divided as to whether the unintended harm causedby health reform will outweigh its benefits.

句型：

Opinions are furiously divided as towhether the unintended harm caused by A will outweigh its benefits.

仿写例句：

Opinions are furiously divided as to whether the unintended harm caused by the Internet will outweigh its benefits.

互联网所带来的意想不到的害处是否会比其带来的益处更大，人们的看法非常不同。

今天的句子：

A great number of graduate students were driven into the intellectual slum when in the United States the intellectual poor became the classic poor, the poor under the rather romantic guise of the Beat Generation, a real phenomenon in the late fifties.

昨天句子的解析：

Nothing better demonstrates/ the point that industrialization was a regional /rather than a national process /than a survey of the states that did not develop industrial economies by the middle of the nineteen century.

主干识别：Nothing better demonstrates A than B

 直接翻译：没有比B更能证明A的事情了。

（B 是最能证明A的）

Nothing better demonstrates the point than a survey

切分成分：A= the point /that industrialization was a regional /rather than a national process

（同位语从句）

B= a survey /of the states （that did not develop industrial economies by the middle of the nineteen century）定语从句

独立成句+调整语序：可以先翻译同位语从句：

1.that industrialization was a regional /rather than（而不是） a national process

工业化的进程是地区性的而非全国性的；

然后翻译：

2. a survey /of the states that did not develop industrial economies by the middle of the nineteen century

这里翻译的时候可以把survey的词性转化为动词；

最后再翻译主句

参考译文：工业化的进程是地区性的而非全国性的，考察一下那些在19世纪中叶还没有发展工业经济的国家，就能最清楚地看出这一点。