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　　英语冲刺复习阶段，很多考生很看重作文，的确，作文是提分的重要题型。大家该如何写好它呢?前面我们分享的模板和素材有很多了，在这里我们就重点通过一个真题详细谈谈写作的思路和要点，帮助大家更好地用好模板，自己写出好文章。

　　我们结合一道非常具有代表性的真题来说一下。这道题是2009年(英语一)大作文题目。

　　Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

　　1) describe the drawing briefly,

　　2) explain its intended meaning, and then

　　3) give your comments.

　　You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

　　面对这道题时，我们需要首先明确写作要求：至少需要写三段话，这三段话针对题目中的三个要求去写。题目中的三个要求是：“描述图片、阐述寓意和个人评论”。对于本题，我们知道，题目要求的是“一幅图”。而一幅图、—图画描述段的段落思路：“直观评价、整体描述、细节描述、过渡句”。

　　按照这样的思路，“直观评价”句，我们可以采用“倒装+定语后置”的句式来撰写，例如，“Here is a picture, interesting but with thought-provoking implication”。

　　接着来看“整体描述”句，该句需要对图片中最引人注目的动作加以描述，例句： “As is vividly showed in the photo, a number of people are working busily within a huge and complex net, which successfully captures our eyes”。这个句子，句首和句尾分别是一个非限制性定语从句，主句部分则由“主语+系动词+表语”结构组成。

　　“细节描述”句，描述的是“能体现寓意的细节”。我们可以写成“After a close watch, it is not difficult to find that the big net is the Internet, through which many people could manage to work together with much convenience and high efficiency but they lack face-to-face communication”。

　　“过渡句”相对来说，简单一些，我们可以写成“Apparently, what the drawing has subtly conveyed is supposed to be given further analysis”。

　　该图片的主题是“网络的近与远”，属于“社会现象”。对这种类型的话题，我们写第二段时需要按照“总—分—总”的段落思路写。

　　Theoretically, the Internet presented by the drawing brings us both advantages and disadvantages. As for my part, the former outweighs its latter. On the top of list is that with the help of Internet, the worldwide economy has developed quickly at a unprecedented pace . In addition, there is the other change that everyone could feel deeply and strongly. It is universally admitted much multifarious work procedures and processes have been cut with the help of Internet. No other case can better illustrate the implication than the picture above.

　　该段层次感比较强，所写的两点：网络能促进经济发展、网络能简化工作流程，内容上讲，还是比较合情合理的。

　　最后第三段是“个人评论段”。需要对题目话题事物——网络，给出相应的评论。当然，要想写好这段，同样可以采用“总—分—总”的思路。以下范文可以供大家参考。

　　According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to maximize its positive effects and minimize the disadvantages. Of all the steps, to make full use of the Internet but not to be totally controlled by it tends to function essentially in the job. Only in this way can we make the best of the value of it.

　　总的来说，应对考研英语作文，同学们一定要把握住：篇章逻辑清楚、段落框架清晰、语句组织准确。

　　最后，针对模板，文都考研辅导班老师提醒大家，以上的范文只是给大家提供一个作文写作的思路，至于怎么写，用什么句子，如何组织句子，还需要大家自己进行创作，形成自己独特的作文“模板”。

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